it was ok
just a few problems in my musical opinion
for one the vocals sounded rushed with no attempt to make a beat with the music
however if that's what your friends were going for then great
last but most important
you do not and i mean DO NOT put a major scale based solo in a minor scale based song
it was good no doubt but it just did not fit
however an overall good track
This is by far one of the best metal works i have seen in the audio portal in some time
can't wait for the lyrics bro
keep it up
I never expected this to be one of my best metal songs yet. I'm actually quite surprised!
I'll be sure to make the lyrics match the potential epicness that this song has. If I can manage to do that, then I'll be amazed with myself.
Thanks for the review!
However Ragin-Asian is right the hammer-on run at the begining of the song is in minor while the rest of the song is major
It just doesn't fit
But it can be fixed, you just have to change the fret thats hit by about half a step and it will work
other than the hammer on run everything else was amazing
the vocalist has room to improve sure but he's still very good
the clean singer sometimes goes flat when he's singing but with practice it'll all be good
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